Kia ora Jojo, What a lovely story! I really like the end where she gets her three wishes, it's very smart of her to wish for infinite wishes! One thing I would suggest is to just go through and check your spelling mistakes. I think your background is really cool and I like that you have used white text on a black background to make the words stand out! Keep up your hard work!
Kia ora Jojo, What a lovely story! I really like the end where she gets her three wishes, it's very smart of her to wish for infinite wishes! One thing I would suggest is to just go through and check your spelling mistakes. I think your background is really cool and I like that you have used white text on a black background to make the words stand out! Keep up your hard work!
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